That Character Fixed

Monday, October 17th, 2011

Mr. Edgar Allan Poe

Author

Boston, Massachusets, U.S.A.

Mr. Poe,

There is always a character of a book you are reading or have read, that you dislike, and that character for me is the murderer on the short story written by you named "The Tell Tale Heart". To begin, "The Tell Tale Heart" is a short story that you first published in 1843, and it follows and unnamed narrator that insists on his sanity after committing a murder to an old man with a "vulture eye". The murder is extremely calculated, so much that with no trouble it was almost impossible for the police to catch him. After the murder, the murderer dismembered the body and hid the parts under the floorboards.

Well, I dislike the murderer´s character for many reasons, but one of the most important is the way he kills the old man when he is absolutely with no power of fighting back. The old man with the vulture eye is completely unaware of what is going on. I like a good old book murder, but for some reason, or maybe because of the character I didn´t enjoy this one. Also, the whole process the murderer made before the murder indeed got me all confused and disappointed. He used to go to the old man´s room every night, for seven nights, but he described that he wasn´t able to kill him because he didn´t hate the old man, just his eye, and the eye was closed. But on the eighth night he sees the eye opened and showing his clouded, pale blue colour and kills him.

The murderer also insists on his sanity even after the murder when just by committing murder and dismembering someone is enough proof that you are not sane. He keeps insisting on it, and uses the excuse that the plan was so good and controlled that an insane person wouldn´t be able to make it. The murderer continues with his insanity and because of it he develops a disease, which is increased by nervousness too. The sickness is called "over-acuteness of the senses". Because of the "disease", the murderer believes in the hallucination of the old man´s beating heart, under the floorboards, he listens to the beats so loud and clear he comes forward to the cops.

Mr. Poe, I do believe you are a master for writing, but let me tell you that this character is the exception to the rule. I didn’t like his craziness and the stupid way he surrenders to the cops. It is quite insulting that the whole process was so elaborate and in the end he just surrenders. Don’t get this the wrong way, I’m just a fan who would love to read about more developed endings.

Yours truly,

Rob Cordón

Review

(date in a formal format)

(Mr. Edgar Allan Poe)

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(City, country)

(Mr. Poe,)

There is always a character of a book you are reading or have read, that you dislike, and that character for me is the murderer on the short story written by Edgar Allan Poe (you) named "The Tell Tale Heart". To begin, "The Tell Tale Heart" is a short story that was(you) first published in 1843, and it follows and unnamed narrator that insists on his sanity after committing a murder(,) to an old man with a "vulture eye". The murder is extremely calculated(,) so much that with no trouble it was almos(almost) impossible for the police to catch him(,)(.) after(After) ther(the) murder(,) the murderer dismembered the body and hid the parts under the floorboards.

Well, I dislike the murderer´s character for many reasons, but one of the most important is the way he kills the old man(,) when he is absolutely with no power of fighting back(,)(.) the(The) old man with the vulture eye in(is) completely unaware of what is going on. I like a good old book murder, but for some reason, or maybe because of the character I didn´t enjoy this one. Also, the whole process the murderer made before the murder indeed (got me all confused and disappointed). He used to go to the old man´s room every night, for seven nights, but he described that he wasn´t able to kill him because he didn´t hate the old man, just his eye, and the eye was closed. But on the eighth night he sees the eye opened and showing his clouded, pale blue colour and kills him.

The murderer also insists on his sanity even after the murder(,) when just by committing murder and dismembering (someone) it´s(is) know(enough proof) that you are not sane(,)(.) he(He) keeps insisting on it, and uses the excuse that the plan was to(so) good and controlled that an insane person wouldn´t be able to make it. The murderer continues with his insanity and because of it he develops a disease, which is developed(increased) by nervousness(,) too(,)(.) the(The) sickness it´s(is) called "over-acuteness of the senses". Because of the "disease(,)" the murder(murderer) believes in the hallucination of the old man´s beating heart, under the floorboards, he listens to the beats so loud and clear he comes forward to the cops.

(Mr. Poe, I do believe you are a master for writing, but let me tell you that this character is the exception to the rule. I didn’t like his craziness and the stupid way he surrenders to the cops. It is quite insulting that the whole process was so elaborate and in the end he just surrenders. Don’t get this the wrong way, I’m just a fan who would love to read about more developed endings.)

(Yours truly,

Your name)

That Character

There is always a character of a book you are reading or have read, that you dislike, and that character for me is the murderer on the short story written by Edgar Allan Poe named "The Tell Tale Heart". To begin, "The Tell Tale Heart" is a short story that was first published in 1843, and it follows and unnamed narrator that insists on his sanity after committing a murder, to an old man with a "vulture eye". The murder is extremely calculated so much that with no trouble it was almos impossible for the police to catch him, after ther murder the murderer dismembered the body and hid the parts under the floorboards.

Well, I dislike the murderer´s character for many reasons, but one of the most important is the way he kills the old man, when he is absolutely with no power of fighting back, the old man with the vulture eye in completely unaware of what is going on. I like a good old book murder, but for some reason, or maybe because of the character I didn´t enjoy this one. Also, the whole process the murderer made before the murder indeed. He used to go to the old man´s room every night, for seven nights, but he described that he wasn´t able to kill him because he didn´t hate the old man, just his eye, and the eye was closed. But on the eighth night he sees the eye opened and showing his clouded, pale blue colour and kills him.

The murderer also insists on his sanity even after the murder, when just by committing murder and dismembering it´s know that you are not sane, he keeps insisting on it, and uses the excuse that the plan was to good and controlled that an insane person wouldn´t be able to make it. The murderer continues with his insanity and because of it he develops a disease, which is developed by nervousness, too, the sickness it´s called "over-acuteness of the senses". Because of the "disease" the murder believes in the hallucination of the old man´s beating heart, under the floorboards, he listens to the beats so loud and clear he comes forward to the cops.

Paper 2 Activity 6

Post Paper 2 Activity 6

Can Money Buy Happiness?

To begin, I have to say that when money is at your disposition, a lot of things become easier just by having money, and I know everybody agrees with that because for example when your body needs food, when you need to eat, you have to buy something to please that need because it is nor a desire, it goes further than that, it is a need. So you buy food, that way you become satisfied. Another point of view is the way we live now; there is nothing you could do without money, even to play sports you need money, to get the needed stuff to play.

But, what does money mean? The actual definition of money is: money is any object or record that is generally accepted as payment for goods and services and payment of debt in any given country or socio-economic context. This concept means that money is the thing that makes you get products at any place, and services of any kind, and with money you make the payment of any debt that you have.

The question that has been made to me, "Can Money Buy Happiness?", is something a lot of people have wondered, but to know the answer to that, first we must know, what happiness means, as there are many kinds of happiness. Happiness is considered to be the mental state of well-being characterized by positive emotions ranging from contentment to intense joy. It means that whenever you are enjoying something, even the tiniest thing, you are happy.

Using the definition of happiness that says that all we need is the "mental state of well-being", I believe that we don’t need money to get to the state of happiness. You could be happy by anything that happens around you, on the environment, even if that "thing" is not about you. I can give you all kind of dumb examples that I´m sure you can relate to. When you think you lost something that you liked or that you needed to do something, even just a pen, when you find that which you are looking for, you get excited, and for a moment you become happy; when you are playing any sport, take soccer, if you score a goal you get happy, just by the fact that it is something good for you; an example that is not about you could be, when a loved one tells you he has a job interview or that he could get something, you truly hope he does, and when he tells you he did, you get happy for him.

So to answer the question "Can Money Buy Happiness?" I say no. To be happy you don’t need any kind of payment.

Review

To begin, I have to say that when money is at your disposition, a lot of things become easier(,) just by having money, and I know everybody agrees with that(,) because for example when your body needs food, when you need to eat, you have to buy something to please that need(,) because it is nor a desire, it goes further than that, it is a need. So you buy food, that way you become satisfied. Another point of view(,) is that the way we live now(,)(;) there is nothing you could do without money, even to play sports you need money, to get the needed stuff to play.

But, what does money means(mean)? The actual definition of money is: money is any object or record that is generally accepted as payment for goods and services and payment of debt in any given country or socio-economic context. This concept means(,) that money is the thing that makes you get products at any place, and services of any kind, and with money you make the payment of any debt that you have.

The question that has been made to me, "Can Money Buy Happiness?", is something a lot of people have wondered, but to now(know) the answer to that, first we must know, what happiness means, as there are many kinds of happiness. Happiness is considered to be the mental state of well-being characterized by by positive emotions ranging from contentment to intense joy. It means that whenever you are enjoying something, even the tiniest thing, that could make you (are) happy.

Using the definition of happiness(,) that says that all we need is the "mental state of well-being", I believe that we dont(don’t) need money to get to the state of happiness. You could be happy by anything that happens around you, on the enviroment(environment), even if that "thing" is not about you. To(I can) give you all kind of dumb examples(,) that Im(I´m) sure you can relate to(:)(.) When you think you lost something that you liked or that you needed to do something, even just a pen, when you find that which you are looking for, you get excited, and for a moment you become happy; when you are playing any sport, take soccer, if you score a goal you get happy, just by the fact that (it) is something good for you; an example that is not about you could be, when a loved one tells you he has a job interview or that he could get something, you truly hope he does, and when he tells you he did, you get happy for him.

So to answer the question "Can Money Buy Happiness?" I say no. To be happy you dont(don’t) need any kind of payment.

Can Money Buy Happiness?

To begin, I have to say that when money is at your disposition, a lot of things become easier, just by having money, and I know everybody agrees with that, because for example when your body needs food, when you need to eat, you have to buy something to please that need, because it is nor a desire, it goes further than that, it is a need. So you buy food, that way you become satisfied. Another point of view, is that the way we live now, there is nothing you could do without money, even to play sports you need money, to get the needed stuff to play.

But, what does money means? The actual definition of money is: money is any object or record that is generally accepted as payment for goods and services and payment of debt in any given country or socio-economic context. This concept means, that money is the thing that makes you get products at any place, and services of any kind, and with money you make the payment of any debt that you have.

The question that has been made to me, "Can Money Buy Happiness?", is something a lot of people have wondered, but to now the answer to that, first we must know, what happiness means, as there are many kinds of happiness. Happiness is considered to be the mental state of well-being characterized by by positive emotions ranging from contentment to intense joy. It means that whenever you are enjoying something, even the tiniest thing, that could make you happy.

Using the definition of happiness, that says that all we need is the "mental state of well-being", I believe that we dont need money to get to the state of happiness. You could be happy by anything that happens around you, on the enviroment, even if that "thing" is not about you. To give you all kind of dumb examples, that Im sure you can relate to: When you think you lost something that you liked or that you needed to do something, even just a pen, when you find that which you are looking for, you get excited, and for a moment you become happy; when you are playing any sport, take soccer, if you score a goal you get happy, just by the fact that is something good for you; an example that is not about you could be, when a loved one tells you he has a job interview or that he could get something, you truly hope he does, and when he tells you he did, you get happy for him.

So to answer the question "Can Money Buy Happiness?" I say no. To be happy you dont need any kind of payment.

Paper 2 Activity 5

Post Paper 2 Activity 5

Debate Speech Fixed

Dear Fellow Students/Debaters

I happen to know there have been going on a debate, concerning the fast food, and weather it should be forbidden for young people under 18 years old or not. I believe that what you´re doing must be for the health of the youngers because of effects that fast food has on their bodies and on their well being. The food that is now growing all around the world might look really tasty and appealing, but so you know it contains a wealth of hidden hazards which are very dangerous when they are eaten in large amounts, and they are a major cause of obesity, especially in children.

Everything that a fast food meal contains is processed, just like processed potatoes, processed eggs and milk products, as well as hydrogenated vegetable oil, saturated fats, gums, sugar substitutes, and lots of other products, that taste good just because the people add herbs and spices. They also contain artificial colours and preservatives and some artificial flavouring which complete the unhealthy package.

The damage that fast food can create is incredible when they are consumed on a regular basis, and almost everyone is doing that. Families work, and they don’t rely on someone to make a meal in a conventional way of cooking with fresh ingredients. I know they are really tasty, I have eaten some myself, but I also eat fresh veggies and fruits, because I know that when your diet lacks of this fresh food, your intake of essential nutrients that are derived from these sources is almost zero. Also, your intake of dietary fiber is so low that could go to nonexistent. What you make to your body with fast food and no fresh food is this:
                              - Raise your blood pressure
                              - Increase the levels of cholesterol
                              - Retard your metabolic rate
                              - Weaken you immune system
                              - Destabilize your sugar levels
                              - Reduce the ability of your colon to function the right way

So in conclusion, fast food makes your body function the wrong way, and it could be deadly. But what I think is that you shouldn´t forbid the fast food to the people younger than 18 years, what we should do is create conscience on them, so they could know that they can eat fast food, once in a while, but that they need fresh ingredients on their bodies so they can work the way they are intended.

Thank for your attention.

Review

Dear Fellow Students/Debaters

I happen to know there have been going on a debate, concerning the fast food, and weather it should be forbidden for young people under 18 years old (or not). I believe that what you´re doing must be for the health of the youngers(,) because of the efects(effects) that fast food has on their bodies and on their well being. They(The) food that is now growing all around the world(,) might look really tasty and appealing, but so you know it contains a wealth of hidden heath hazzards(hazards) wich(which) are very dangerous when they are eaten in large amounts, and they are a major cause of obesity, especially in children.

Everything that a fast food (meal) contains is processed, just like processed potatoes, processed eggs and milk products, as well as hydrogenated vegetable oil, saturated fats, gums, sugar substitutes, and lots of other products, that taste good just becasue(because) the people add herbs and spices. They also contain artificial colours and preservatives and some artificial flavouring(.) That the (which) complete (the) unhealthy package.

The damage that fast food can create is incredible(,) when they are consumed on a regular basis, and almost everyone is doing that. Families work, and they dont(don’t) rely on someone to make a meal(,) (in) a conventional way of cooking with fresh ingredients. I know they are really tasty, I have eaten some myself, but I also eat fresh veggies and fruits, because I know that when your diet lack(lacks) of this fresh food, your intake of essential nutrients that are derived from these sources is almos(almost) zero. Also, your intake of dieatary(dietary) fiber is so low that could go to nonexistent. What you make to your body with fast food and no fresh food is this:
                              - Raise your blood pressure
                              - Increase the levels of colesterol(cholesterol)
                              - Retard your metabolic rate
                              - Weaken you inmune(immune) system
                              - Destabilize your sugar levels
                              - Reduce the hability(ability) of your colon to function the right way

So in conclusion, fast food makes your body function the wrong way, and it could be deadly. But what I think is that you shouldn´t forbidd(forbid) the fast food to the people younger than 18 years, what we should do is create conscience on them, so they could know that they can eat fast food, once in a while, but that they need fresh ingredients on their body(bodies) so it(they) could(can) work the way it(they) is(are) intended.

Thank for your attention.

Debate Speech

Dear Fellow Students/Debaters

I happen to know there have been going on a debate, concerning the fast food, and weather it should be forbidden for young people under 18 years old. I believe that what you´re doing must be for the health of the youngers, because of the efects that fast food has on their bodies and on their well being. They food that is now growing all around the world, might look really tasty and appealing, but so you know it contains a wealth of hidden heath hazzards wich are very dangerous when they are eaten in large amounts, and they are a major cause of obesity, especially in children.

Everything that a fast food contains is processed, just like processed potatoes, processed eggs and milk products, as well as hydrogenated vegetable oil, saturated fats, gums, sugar substitutes, and lots of other products, that taste good just becasue the people add herbs and spices. They also contain artificial colours and preservatives and some artificial flavouring. That the complete unhealthy package.

The damage that fast food can create is incredible, when they are consumed on a regular basis, and almost everyone is doing that. Families work, and they dont rely on someone to make a meal, a conventional way of cooking with fresh ingredients. I know they are really tasty, I have eaten some myself, but I also eat fresh veggies and fruits, because I know that when your diet lack of this fresh food, your intake of essential nutrients that are derived from these sources is almos zero. Also, your intake of dieatary fiber is so low that could go to nonexistent. What you make to your body with fast food and no fresh food is this:
                              - Raise your blood pressure
                              - Increase the levels of colesterol
                              - Retard your metabolic rate
                              - Weaken you inmune system
                              - Destabilize your sugar levels
                              - Reduce the hability of your colon to function the right way

So in conclusion, fast food makes your body function the wrong way, and it could be deadly. But what I think is that you shouldn´t forbidd the fast food to the people younger than 18 years, what we should do is create conscience on them, so they could know that they can eat fast food, once in a while, but that they need fresh ingredients on their body so it could work the way it is intended.

Thank for your attention.