jueves, 3 de febrero de 2011

Give Me A 0º

By far the most dangerous drug out there, combined with literal poison, a cigarette. Tobacco, is made using the dried up leaves of a plant named "Nicotina Tabacum", which includes a widely know drug, Nicotine. It´s a powerful stimulator of our central system, but also extremely toxic, and don´t forget this, it is the reason why you get addicted. You know? Smoking became famous because it looked appealing, ironic, it gives you cancer and heart diseases, your respiratory system starts getting obstructed, but those are just fancy ways to saying that... smoking kills you. Smoking one stogy takes 30 seconds of your life. How many do you smoke? How many have you smoked?

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  1. Nice writing but you don´t seem to have included a topic sentence. Make the necessary corrections in a new entry (do not edit the previous one).

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