Writing Activity 5

Write a paragraph where you compare and/or contrast two restaurants.

How To Install A Program (Fixed)

If you like downloading music and videos, I think Ares will be really helpful for you. First of all we need to install Ares to start using it, and the process to install it is very simple; you just have to follow a few steps. First, you need to know  Ares is a P2P application to share files through the internet so everybody can download them (files can be audio, videos, images, texts, programs, etc.). Second, you need to download Ares, and save it on your computer, wherever you want. Third, you need to open the program and run it, you have to read the license agreement and then click the button that says "I Agree". Then, you have to click the button that says "Next" and finally click the button that says "Install". You have to wait for a few minutes. When Ares starts running, you have to type a user name, and you have to select the connection speed, and it’s done. You have succeeded in downloading Ares. Now, you can enjoy uploading and downloading all the files you can.

Review

If you like downloading music and videos, i(I) think Ares will be really helpfull(helpful) for you. First of all we need to install Ares to start using (it), and the process to install it is very simple(;) you just have to follow a few steps. First, you need to knwo(know) what Ares is(,) and it is a P2P application to share files through the internet so everybody can download them (files can be audio, videos, images, texts, programs, etc.). Second, you need to download Ares, and save (it) on your computer, wherever you want. Third, you need to open the program and run it, you have to read the license agreement and then click the button that says "I Agree". Then, you have to click the button that says "Next" and finally click the button that says "Install". You have to wait for a few minutes. When Ares starts running, you have to type a user name, and you have to select the conection(connection) speed, and its(it’s) done. You have succeeded in downloading Ares. Now, you can enjoy uploading and downloading all the files you can.

How To Install A Program

If you like downloading music and videos, i think Ares will be really helpfull for you. First of all we need to install Ares to start using, and the process to install it is very simple you just have to follow a few steps. First, you need to knwo what Ares is, and it is a P2P application to share files through the internet so everybody can download them (files can be audio, videos, images, texts, programs, etc.). Second, you need to download Ares, and save on your computer, wherever you want. Third, you need to open the program and run it, you have to read the license agreement and then click the button that says "I Agree". Then, you have to click the button that says "Next" and finally click the button that says "Install". You have to wait for a few minutes. When Ares starts running, you have to type a user name, and you have to select the conection speed, and its done. You have succeeded in downloading Ares. Now, you can enjoy uploading and downloading all the files you can.

Writing Activity 4

Write a paragraph where you explain how to install a program in your computer.

Internal Evaluation Script (Fixed)

Good morning, my name is Roberto Cordon and I’m going to talk about a TV Series, and how it shows the reality of the Hollywood Lifestyle. The TV series is called Entourage, and it was created in 2004; it was created and mostly written by Doug Ellin. The series follows the life of a young actor, from the beginning of his career, until he becomes famous all around the world, and how he and his best friends use his fame to get what they want. They use his fame to get what they want, for example, sex, drugs, getting into clubs, getting free stuff, etc. Just like the series shows, some actors, or musicians, have a reputation of partying too much, doing drugs, having sex with fans, going to rehab more than once, having trouble with alcohol, and getting arrested. Most superstars use their fame to get stuff, but the series also shows another view of the Hollywood lifestyle which is the friendship. The main character is known by everyone for always being with his best friends, his entourage, that’s the reason of the name. It shows how his real friends protect him, for example, from doing excessive use of drugs, or doing a public scandal that could ruin his career. It also shows the importance of having the family close; the main character takes his mom to premiers, and tries to help his brother with becoming an A-list star, like him. Not every star is as shallow as they appear to be, some actually care for someone else that themselves, that what Entourage shows us. It also shows that everybody can make mistakes, but that we should not judge them just because of it. The life of an actor looks like something everybody would like to have, but its not always so glamorous, it can be full of up and downs, and it can be lonely, too. 

Review

Good morning, my name is Roberto Cordon and I’m gonna(going to talk) about a TV Series, and how it shows the reality of the Hollywood Lifestyle. The TV series is called Entourage, (and) it was created in 2004; it was created and is mostly written by Doug Ellin. The series follow(follows) the life of a young actor, from the beginning of his career, until he becomes famous all around the world, and how he and his best friends(,) use his fame to get what they want. They use their(his) fame to get what they want, for example, sex, drugs, getting into clubs, getting free stuff, etc. Just like the series show(shows), some actors, or musicians, have a reputation of partying too much, doing drugs, having sex with fans, going to rehab more than once, having trouble with alcohol, and getting arrested. Most superstars use their fame to get stuff, but the series also show(shows) another view of the Hollywood lifestyle(,) which is the friendship. The main character is known by everyone for always being with his best friends, his entourage, that’s the reason of the name. It shows how his real friends protect him, for example, from doing excessive use of drugs, or doing a public scandal that could ruin his career. It also shows the importance of having the family close(,)(;) the main character takes his mom to premiers, and tries to help his brother with becoming an A-list star, like him. (So what do we learn from Entourage in relation to the Hollywood lifestyle?)

Internal Evaluation Script

Good morning, my name is Roberto Cordon and I’m gonna about a TV Series, and how it shows the reality of the Hollywood Lifestyle. The TV series is called Entourage, it was created in 2004; it was created and is mostly written by Doug Ellin. The series follow the life of a young actor, from the beginning of his career, until he becomes famous all around the world, and how he and his best friends, use his fame to get what they want. They use their fame to get what they want, for example, sex, drugs, getting into clubs, getting free stuff, etc. Just like the series show, some actors, or musicians, have a reputation of partying too much, doing drugs, having sex with fans, going to rehab more than once, having trouble with alcohol, and getting arrested. Most superstars use their fame to get stuff, but the series also show another view of the Hollywood lifestyle, which is the friendship. The main character is known by everyone for always being with his best friends, his entourage, that’s the reason of the name. It shows how his real friends protect him, for example, from doing excessive use of drugs, or doing a public scandal that could ruin his career. It also shows the importance of having the family close, the main character takes his mom to premiers, and tries to help his brother with becoming an A-list star, like him.

Internal Evaluation

Post the script of your Internal Evaluation (recording).

What´s Your Number? Fixed

A cell phone, or mobile, is an electronic device used to make calls from where ever you are, instead of using a home phone, that just works inside your home. A cell doesn't need to be conected or to be in a certain range of a base line; it can work everywhere, and all it needs is charge. Now the cells are usually smaller than your hand, unlike the first cells of history that were the size of a brick. Now they're 3 inches long and 5 inches tall, and normally half an inch deep.They also weigh around 4 ounces. At first they were used just to make calls, but as times change, they have changed too. Now a cell has a camera to take pictures and video; it can be used to get online (updating your facebook, using twitter, watching your mail, downloading music or videos, etc.), these cells are now called smartphones.The phones have all sorts of screens, such as: Phosphorus screens, flat screens, plasma screens, LCD screens, projection screens, touch screens, wide screens, 3D screens, etc. Lately, the phones are listed, by the World Health Organization, as a possible carcinogen which is a category of the dangers of chemical exposure because it's believed that the phones emit radioactivity waves that, eventually, are really dangerous to our health. So use your phone, but don't do excessive use of it

Review

A cell phone, or mobile, is an electronic device used to make calls from where ever you are, instead of using a home phone, that just works inside your home. A cell doesn't need to be conected or to be in a certain range of a base line(,)(;) it can work everywhere, and all it needs is charge. Now the cells are usually smaller than your hand, unlike the first cells of history(,) that were the size of a brick. Now they're 3 inches long and 5 inches tall, (and normally) half an inch depth(deep) normally.They also weigh around 4 ounces. At first they were used just to make calls, but as times change, they have changed too. Now a cell has a camera to take pictures and video; it can be used to get online (updating your facebook, using twitter, watching your mail, downloading music or videos, etc.), these cells are now called smartphones.The phones has(have) all sorts of screens, such as: Phosphorus screens, flat screens, plasma screens, LCD screens, projection screens, touch screens, wide screens, 3D screens, etc. Lately, the phones are listed, by the World Health Organization, as a possible carcinogen which is a category of the dangers of chemical exposure because it's believed that the phones emit radioactivity waves that, eventually, are really dangerous to our health. So use your phone, but don't do excessive use of it

What´s Your Number?

A cell phone, or mobile, is an electronic device used to make calls from where ever you are, instead of using a home phone, that just works inside your home. A cell doesn't need to be conected or to be in a certain range of a base line, it can work everywhere, and all it needs is charge. Now the cells are usually smaller than your hand, unlike the first cells of history, that were the size of a brick. Now they're 3 inches long and 5 inches tall, half an inch depth normally.They also weigh around 4 ounces. At first they were used just to make calls, but as times change, they have changed too.Now a cell has a camera to take pictures and video; it can be used to get online (updating your facebook, using twitter, watching your mail, downloading music or videos, etc.), these cells are now called smartphones.The phones has all sorts of screens, such as: Phosphorus screens, flat screens, plasma screens, LCD screens, projection screens, touch screens, wide screens, 3D screens, etc. Lately, the phones are listed, by the World Health Organization, as a possible carcinogen which is a category of the dangers of chemical exposure because it's believed that the phones emit radioactivity waves that, eventually, are really dangerous to our health. So use your phone, but don't do excessive use of it.

Review

A cell phone, or mobile, is an electronic device used to make calls from where ever you are, instead of using a home phone, that just works inside your home. A cell doesn't need to be conected or to be in a certain range of a base line, it can work everywhere, and all it needs is charge. Now the cells are usually smaller than your hand, unlike the first cells of history, that were the size of a brick. Now they're 3 inches long and 5 inches tall, (depth?) normally. It(They) also weights(weigh) around 4 ounces. At first they were used just to make calls, but as time(times) cahnges(change), it(they) has been(have) changing(changed) too(,)(.) now(Now) a cell has a camera to take pictures and video(,)(;) it can be used to get online (updating your facebook, using twitter, watching your mail, download(downloading) music or videos, etc.), these cells are now called smartphones.(All of this is possible because of the improved screens which are????) Lately, the phones are listed, by the World Health Organization, as a possible carcinogen(,) which is a category of the dangers of chemical exposure(,) because it's believed that the phones emit radioactivity waves that, eventually, are really dangerous to our health. So use your phone, but don't do excessive use (of it).

What´s Your Number?

A cell phone, or mobile, is an electronic device used to make calls from where ever you are, instead of using a home phone, that just works inside your home. A cell doesn't need to be conected or to be in a certain range of a base line, it can work everywhere, and all it needs is charge. Now the cells are usually smaller than your hand, unlike the first cells of history, that were the size of a brick. Now they're 3 inches long and 5 inches tall, normally. It also weights around 4 ounces. At first they were used just to make calls, but as time cahnges, it has been changing too, now a cell has a camera to take pictures and video, it can be used to get online (updating your facebook, using twitter, watching your mail, download music or videos, etc.), these cells are now called smartphones. Lately, the phones are listed, by the World Health Organization, as a possible carcinogen, which is a category of the dangers of chemical exposure, because it's believed that the phones emit radioactivity waves that, eventually, are really dangerous to our health. So use your phone, but don't do excessive use.